好的開頭是高分作文必不可少的要素,是吸引閱卷老師注意的關鍵。通過分析近十年的四六級高分作文,我們歸納出了四六級作文首段常用的寫作方法!
海都記者 王林成 關銘榮 文及圖
具體如下:
現象闡釋法
現象闡釋法指的是直接就題目進行簡單描述,給出自己的理解。這是現象解釋型和問題解決型作文最常用的一種方法。
現象闡釋法的結構素材主要分為兩種:
描述現象/圖片
描述現象:
1. Recently, the rise in the problem of ______ has aroused public/wide concern.
近來, ______問題的增加已經引起了公眾/廣泛的關注。
2. Recently, the issue of ______ has been brought into focus/brought to public attention.
近來, ______問題已經成為人們關注的焦點。
3. The problem of ______ has caused wide concern over recent years.
近年來, ______問題已經引起了廣泛的關注。
4. With the rapid growth of ______ , ______ have/has become increasingly important in our daily life.
隨著 ______的快速增長, ______在我們的日常生活中已經變得越來越重要。
5. Now there is a growing awareness/recognition of the necessity to ______ .
如今,人們越來越意識到 ______的必要性。
6. Now people in growing/significant numbers are beginning/coming to realize/be aware that ______.
如今,越來越多的人開始意識到 ______。
7. After a good many years of enthusiasm for ______ , people begin to ______ .
熱衷于 ______多年之后,人們開始 ______。
8. One of the burning/pressing questions/problems facing/confronting our nation/society today is ______ .
我們的國家/社會今天面臨的緊迫問題之一是 ______。
9. With ______ playing an increasingly important role in ______ , more and more ______ .
隨著在 ______中的作用日益重要,越來越多的 ______。
10. Whenever you see/find ______ , you can't help being shocked/surprised at ______ .
每當看到/發現 ______的時候,你會不禁為 ______感到震驚/驚訝。
描述圖表:
11. As the bar chart shows, the number of ______ has dramatically increased/decreased during the ______ years from ______ to ______.
如柱狀圖所示, ______的數量從 ______年到 ______年 ______年之間急劇增加/減少。
12. From the graph, we know the statistics of ______ and ______ . It can be seen easily that ______.
從圖表中我們可知 ______和 ______的數據。我們可以很容易地看出 ______。
13. From the bar chart, it is clear that between ______and ______ the amount of ranged from ______to ______ .
從柱狀圖中可以清楚地看到,從 ______到 ______, ______的數量在 ______到 ______之間變化。
14. As the bar chart shows, great changes concerning ______ took place between ______ and ______ .
柱狀圖表明,從 ______到 ______, ______發生了很大的變化。
15. As can be seen in the graph, ______ saw great changes in ______ between ______ and ______ .
從圖表可知,在 ______到 ______之間, ______發生了巨大變化。
描述漫畫:
16. The cartoon vividly depicts ______.
這幅漫畫生動地描述了 ______。
17. As is described in the picture, ______ .
如圖中所描述的, ______。
18. As is vividly indicated in the above drawing/picture, ______ .
如上圖生動地描述的那樣,______。
19. The drawing, thought-provoking as it is, does mirror a social phenomenon that ______ .
這幅發人深省的圖畫的確反映了這樣一個社會現象: ______。
20. In the cartoon presented to us, ______. Obviously, what the cartoon illustrates/reveals is ______ .
在展現給我們的圖片中, ______。顯然,該圖片說明/揭示的是 ______。
21. As is symbolically depicted in the drawing above, ______. Although the drawing is designed simply, it does reveal that ______ .
正如上圖象征性地描繪的一樣, ______。雖然該圖很簡單,它確實反映了 ______。
22. As is vividly illustrated in the cartoon, ______ . The central point of this cartoon is that ______.
正如漫畫中生動展示的, ______。該漫畫的主旨是 ______。
引出觀點
1. This picture demonstrates one of the basic theories of philosophy:______ .
這幅圖片展現了哲學的一個基本理論:______。
2. Such a picture draws attention to the fact that______ .
這樣一種畫面吸引我們注意到這樣的現實:______。
3. The purpose of the drawing is to show us that ______.
這幅畫是為了向我們展示______。
4. The painter reminds us of a common social phenomenon: ______.畫的作者提醒了我們一個普遍的社會現象:______。
觀點引入法
引出觀點
引入法是觀點論證型作文常用的一種方法。該方法開門見山地提出主題,并逐漸引出個人觀點。觀點引入法常用素材有:
1. “______” is a proverb full of logic, which has been generally accepted.
“______”是一個非常有道理的諺語,被人們普遍接受。
2. As the old saying goes, “ ______.” It tells us that ______.
古語道:“______。”該諺語告訴我們______。
3. When it comes to ______ , some think/hold/believe that ______. Others argue that the opposite is true.
當提及______時,有人認為______。其他人則認為事實恰好相反。
4. There is a public/general debate/discussion today/nowadays on/over/as to the problem/issue of ______.
如今,有一場關于______問題公開的/普遍的爭論/討論。
5. When asked whether it is advisable to ______, different people have different things to say.
關于______是否明智這個問題,不同的人有不同的看法。
6. People's opinions about ______ vary from person to person.
關于______,人們的觀點因人而異。
7. Some people propose such a question:______ .
許多人提出這樣一個問題:______。
8. Different people hold different views about______ .
對于______,不同的人有不同的看法。
9. Faced with______ , quite a few people think that______ , but others conceive of it differently.
面對______,許多人認為______,但是其他人則持有不同的觀點。
引出觀點中的道理
1. It tells us that ______.
它告訴我們______。
2. It reminds us that ______.
它提醒我們______。
3. It means that ______.
它意味著______。
4. This proverb reflects ______.
該諺語反映了______。
5. The truth of this saying is ______.
這句話的真相是______。
6. Personally, I stand on the side of ______.
就個人而言,我支持______。
7. As far as I am concerned, I am in favor of the opinion that ______.
就我而言,我贊同______的觀點。
8. I agree that priority should be given to ______.
我贊同______具有優先權的觀點。